Susan Buchanan has joined me today to talk WIP. Welcome Susan...
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Hi Carol
Thanks for the opportunity to talk about my new WIP, The Dating Game (working title). I started writing this again in March 2012
after a gap of two years and eight months, when I was travelling a lot
internationally for work and had no spare time to speak of. I recently self-published my first novel, Sign of the Times, and following the
warm response from readers, I was spurred on to start writing again. Since then
I have set up my writer’s blog, originally for readers to follow the progress of
this, my second novel, but it has fast become also a place for fellow writers to
check in for tips and leave comments.
The
Dating Game is more in the genre of chick lit than my
previous work, which is contemporary women’s fiction, but it still has its
serious side. I like to think of it as
chick lit with less fluff.
I am now just over a quarter of the way through the first
draft of The Dating Game and aim for
it to be published on Amazon by the end of the year. To ensure the novel is ready, my editor will
be editing the earlier chapters whilst I write the remainder. I will need to do
second drafts each week, so it’s a busy time! I have a whiteboard behind my desk, where I
write up scenes, ideas for characters and potential plot developments. I also
have a box of ideas which I have collected over the years – seriously; it’s a
huge box file which is overflowing! I
also like to know the characters inside out, even stuff that I might not use
eventually in the novel, like their favourite actor, city or preferred pasta
type. The more I sketch the characters
in my mind, the more they feel real to me and so I hope to the readers. I
create a separate Word document for each character and update it daily with new
things I learn about them or that they unveil to me. It’s true to say I already miss the characters
from Sign of the Times. I am sure the
same will be true of The Dating Game
when I finish it. Currently I am trying
to do 1000 words per day, or to the end of a scene and that’s working so
far. I need to do at least this, as I am
sure the editing will take up the last few months of the year. We had at least
ten drafts before the final cut of Sign
of the Times, but I think all that work made it a tighter novel.
I love the writing phase, creating the characters, making
unexpected changes in the plot, or taking the novel off in a different
direction to that originally intended. Today for example, I decided that the
novel would no longer only be told from Gill’s viewpoint. That’s a pretty
significant change and will alter immensely the rest of the novel, as well as
how the readers engage with it.
The editing stage…well, I can’t say it’s my favourite
task, particularly when I have to cut sections that I love, to comply with a
publisher’s word count, but I enjoy it as I interact very well with my editor,
who is an old friend from university. She tells me things like ‘No, you can’t
call him that! Nobody called their son that back in the 70s’ and then backs it
up with proof, showing me that it was the 1064th most popular boy’s
name that year. Or when I unwittingly
called one of my characters after a minor celebrity – what do I know about
cricket? I’ve learned my lesson this time around. I am very picky about grammar
and punctuation, but she is even more particular!
It’s too early in the writing process to have a full blurb,
and I currently have two endings, but to give you a few hints I would say the
following about The Dating Game:
Workaholic recruitment consultant Gill McFadden is sick
of her friends trying to match-make for her.
Up until now her love life has been a disaster and she’s going through a drier spell than the
Sahara desert. Seeing an ad on a bus one
day, she decides to visit Happy Ever After dating agency. Before long she is experiencing laughs, lust and…
could it be love? But like everything in
Gill’s life, nothing is straightforward and she ends up wondering exactly who
she can trust.
The
Dating Game will be released in Dec 2012 and will be
available as an e-book from Amazon.
Susan’s
first book Sign of the Times is
already available from Amazon, in e-book version - http://amzn.to/GKqZGd & http://amzn.to/IYN0Fc
The Dating Game
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Or follow her on Twitter @Susan_Buchanan


Great post. I love seeing how writers' work and where their inspiration comes from.
ReplyDeleteBest of luck, Susan! I can relate entirely to the 'ten draft' comment. I used to feel a bit sad, knowing that what I write that first time around will be tweaked or changed, or even deleted. However, I see those re-writes and edits, and more re-writes... as a chance to re-engage with my characters now - and actually quite enjoy it! :) x
ReplyDeleteLoving the idea of this being chick-lit with less fluff.
ReplyDeleteStrangely, I love editing. It's the first draft that's the trickiest bit of the writing process for me. But we're all different. Good luck with your unfluffy 'The Dating Game'. Gilli x
ReplyDeletejust wanted to say thanks for all your great comments and again to Carol for hosting me. Sooz
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Susan for being guest this week :)
carol